Sometimes when I m alone
I cry because I m on my own
The tears I cry are bitter and warm
They flow with life but take no form
I cry because i am worn out am torn
and I find it difficult to carry on...
If I had an ear to confide in
I would cry among my treasured friends
But who do u know that stops that long
to help another carry on..!
The world moves fast and it would rather pass u by
than to stop and see what makes u cry
It's painful and sad and sometimes I cry and no one cares about why?
no one cares about why :'(
7 comments:
hmm...sounds like my own echo!
well thats how d world is...empathy is hard to come by! as for those ears u wanted well ..i can lend mine...without interest % ! and whats more u can have them for a life time![:P]
wow..! n a muaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhz 4 u .. :), dun consider urself alone.. njoy urself,within u..n lo.. Itemsssssss darling wont ever cry thn ..:)feelin alone... Smile n smile n smile.. like d way u r.. exceptionally rockin :D... Rock it baby ..:)leave d tears !:)again a muaaaaaaaahhz ..!
tc ..
vrish, contents and the vocab u r using is very gud. but i dont want u to spend ur writing talents on these topics. Try to b versatile. on the 1st day itself i tld u u can go very far in this field. but dont write on these kinda issues.
gul, learn to ignore being ignored.. and also persistence..stand firmly...forlorn moments in lyf are obvious but its on u to make them momentary or nt...though a sturdy task..learn not to get drowned by emotions..which has been the toughest task..for every1
pillu, when did you start writing so well!
Good one...Really good one :)
the matching of words and the flow of emotions is so deep.
same sitchuation i faced in past.
U care of your emotions.
respect them too. that means
U care of others, that is enough and is a good character of ur personality.
So, why to think of others, they are not bound to think of anybody else. if u will start thinking like others tell u that u will soon loose your Identity, which is unique. Be your self.
and the otherside of life is also beautiful.
sometimes u r alone n u must have smiled at u...
one Blog on this topic u can write...must write. :)
cheers for life.....
very well written!
bt i cant see some1 so sad :( cheer up baby.....there are few good ppl out der (like me [;)] [:P]) go n meet dem :D
waiting for a good positive post :)
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